Power of Love & Hate (#0026)

First, a quick update; During the last month, I published my novella from NaNo’15! While I won’t give the title or my penname here because I’d like to keep it separate, I will discuss the experience as I learn more about the process.

I chose to go all in with Amazon/Kindle. I barely set up a platform prior to publication and instead, plan to build around the publication gradually as I publish more related materials under the same penname and learn more about readers who are interested.

More than once, I wanted to give up. More than once, I figured the whole book was a mess. Towards the final chapters in the editing process, I found myself wanting to go back to previous chapters I had already marked as finished and “fix this little thing here” or just “tweak that tiny bit there”…Until I realized, this was a trap. The perfectionism would never end. There would always be a “little thing” or “tiny bit”.

So, I made the firm decision to keep moving forward regardless. The chapters I marked finished were finished! No going back, no five-time edits (like with my fantasy novel which has easily undergone 4-6 rewrites in the past 3 years), if I felt it was good to mark as complete, then I had to trust myself.

And that was how I managed to finally publish something! I’m excited to learn about what it is like to manage an author account on Amazon and the tools available (for instance, mailing lists… I’ll have to devote some time to learning how to handle them).

My novella might not gain a lot of traction, but that’s okay because it was never about becoming an overnight bestseller. I’m playing a long game. I won’t be abandoning my first publication either, but will be building attention towards it by releasing short stories in the next month that involve the novella’s characters. I’ve been involved in writing these for the rest of this month. Come March, however, I’ll be focusing on the MRD manuscript and publishing under this name if I’m liking Kindle enough.

Speaking of characters… let’s get to the heart of this post and talk some about the power of love and hate in regards to creating and developing characters!


Something I consider while plotting is the concept of love and the concept of hate, how these emotions are processed and expressed by different personalities and the layers that can represent the inherent symbolism of the story’s thematic relation with these concepts.

The importance of Love & Hate pervades almost every aspect of a grand tales in fiction from the plot’s tension points to the characters that people resonate with. In every layer of a story, love has a place and hate can be found.

Authors can make bold (or tired) statements about these concepts through the meta-language of their stories. They can communicate with people they’ve never met and express their understanding. Those readers, in turn, can internalize that understanding and compile it with their own logic to explore new perspectives or even strengthen old perspectives.

Nothing illustrates this more than with characters.

Being capable of making people care about a story’s characters is an often discussed topic amongst the writing community, especially when it comes to the protagonist.

But it’s much more than whether a reader likes the protagonist. As a writer, I don’t guide a reader towards either loving or hating a character through narrative unless it has something to do with the POV being used. Also, I have no intention to force a reader to care about a character.

Instead, I treat my characters as a mixture of symbolic concepts and observant realism. This is how I develop them. Taking note of the interplay between the characters helps too, allowing dynamics to be born through interaction. I don’t tend to use strict role definitions such as Romantic Interest, Antagonist, Sidekick, etc. though I have if it helps develop further depth. Eventually, however, I discard these role titles.

Making people care about every character seems like an impossible goal, yet it is a worthy challenge for a writer to strive for.

When it comes to characters, the layers of love and hate are ever-present.

If you’re an author, and wonder about how this applies to a cast of your characters, ask yourself the following questions;

  • What does my character think about love? about hate? What do they believe?
  • How do they express love? How do they express hate? – Through actions? Through words?
  • Are they in love? Has love hurt them? Healed them? Do they hate someone or something? Do they love and hate something/someone simultaneously? How and why?
  • Do they spend most of their time feeling sensations of love? Or vice-versa?
  • How often does the narrative portray this depth of the character’s relation with love/hate?

Go beyond and work upwards through layers to reach the thematic tone with these other questions that are more bent on world-building…

  • As the author, do I want to focus on the character’s thoughts more or do I want to focus on the character’s actions?
  • How is love treated in the culture surrounding the character? How is hate? How is [love/hate] treated outside the culture, but within the world? How about within the character’s family?
  • Does hate justify immoral actions within the world’s culture? Does love justify immoral actions?
  • Does hate destroy or does it create? How about love?

Remember, this isn’t the metalevel about our own world, but it is about the world that you are creating as a fictional writer. It is important to consider things like this, to get a firm grasp on what your universe is and how more stories and more characters can be built from it.

Now, if your world does resemble our own cultural world, that is okay! It’s just an understanding to be had and to consider either way.

For these purposes, love and hate is a multidimensional spectrum in which there are infinite combinations. In the infinity of possibilities, a character represents those unique combinations. Let your characters be individuals! Let them have different views and reactions towards the subjective qualities of love and hate. Let those views clash and intertwine and dance across the scenes through dialogue, action, narrative, and inevitably, the course-changing decisions they will probably make within the story.

For me, personally, I prefer for readers to feel passionate about the characters. It doesn’t so much matter that they like the protagonist or hate the antagonist, as long as they FEEL something one way or the other. One of the worst things when it comes to a reader’s reaction to character development (and this is how the statement of ‘make them care’ is true) is apathy. You want them to feel that power of love and hate radiating from the words you write, resonating and interacting with their own feelings about those concepts.

Feel free to comment below. This discussion is something that I’m still thinking through, myself, and I kind of skimmed the surface with this post, but hopefully it will inspire some of ya other creatives to further explore your own characters and the worlds they exist in.

Welcome to 2016~



7 thoughts on “Power of Love & Hate (#0026)

  1. I am so impressed by the analytical thought you put into your characters and the effects emotions might invoke. I REALLY like your “Don’t go back if it’s finished” policy. Congratulations and continued good luck.

  2. First of all, a big congratulations to publishing your nano novel! What an awesome accomplishment!

    Second, excellent exposition on a character’s makeup. Love (and hate) are universal, no matter what planet, culture, location, breed, or what have you. Without emotions, you have no character. Might as well write a book about a rock (no offense to the rocks or rock-lovers out there). If you’re passionate about your characters, they will exude that from the pages!

    • Thank you x2! I like your mention of rocks, lol. The universality of love and hate makes me consider that certain other emotions could be added to analysis of a character’s development to provide even more depth. Love and Hate are foundational with a variety of emotions that can be built onto those concepts; for instance, sorrow, anger, joy, fear, and so on. Whatever the emotion though and how it interacts with the foundational concepts, I completely agree that if passion is involved, it will exude from the pages. Thanks for commenting. :3

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